The River
Late summer morning I bolt from the back door,
barefoot, carrying a pillowcase for collecting treasures, for sitting on, for wearing.
Wild child, pretending to be orphaned, or a runaway captive, or a free bird.
Running downhill half a mile, rocky road, dusty feet, until I get to the field. No one sees me.
I am alone.
I slither under the barbed wire fence, and dive into the shoulder high grass.
Completely encased and completely still - becoming one with my surrounding.
The dust on my feet dissipates as muddy water encircles my ankles.
Frogs, birds, small creatures, small me, in the waving grass together.
I creep and crouch and sprint and leap - still on the go. My destination: the River.
Careful footed, I braid myself through the fields, every so often jolted from my dream-like determination by the sound of a roaring 4-wheeler, or a distant voice.
I duck.
Passing by the pond, abandoned by visitors for what could be decades, I wonder who else knows about this secret place. Am I the only one alive in the world who knows about this pond-discovery?
I imagine what girl or boy from a hundred years ago played here. Who does the half-sunken row boat belong to? I stand there for a long time, wondering.
I continue.
Hours later, I make it to the river bank. I sit. I ponder. I make patterns in the sand.
By now my pillowcase is full of long grass to weave together into a mat. I haven't figured out how to make a basket yet. Hot sun. The breeze occasionally whisking against my freckled skin. I dip my toes in the cool river but never venture further than knee deep. I know what the river can do - I know the power it holds. It's late afternoon now, it's time to head back.
I'll come back tomorrow.
Megan,
ReplyDeleteI think I have said this a million times, but your descriptive language in your writing is amazing. You do a great job pulling the reader in and evoking different emotions through your word choice.
As far as the emotions you were going for, digging deep indicates the sense of happiness. Your freedom and sense of wonder elude happiness. The emotion that shines through the most is contentment. I keep going back to that one, along with wonder.
Great piece! Thanks for sharing.
Megan T.
Megan,
ReplyDeleteSorry if this already posted. I'm having technology issues.
I love your choice in structure for this post. I love how you set lines apart, like "I continue." I think it made the writing more powerful. I also love your use of two-word sentences. It set a tone for the writing.
While I felt the feeling of wonder and contentment, I wouldn't have used the word "happy" to describe it. I felt it was more secretive and mysterious. I loved the mysterious feel of it though! I thought you used great word choice and I wish I had your ability of word play. This was a great post!